Unfortunately, i don't like the real ending. So I decided to change it for a more exciting one.
This is an alternative ending of the story:
... Hamish arrives at the tover. There were three big wodden doors, and next to him a sing wiht a message: "Just one of these doors will take you to the real entry. The others will lead you to a terrible trap."
He was about to open the second door, when he heard a whistle. He looked behind him an saw something in the bush. There was an old man, making hand signals to him.
- I can't understand what you are saying, sir !. -
The old man came closer to him and told him. - The three door are traps. The real entry is behind the tower. -
Hamish was very surprised, but he didn't know if he could trust that man. Anyway, he went behind the building and saw a little green strapdoor on the floor. The old man was right, and he walked trhough the large hallway until he found a very big ladder. He wen up the ladder and discovered what the King Of Wizards was doing with his son.
Calum was tied up inside a big glass jar. The King was stealing his magic *. The plan was to take if from him so the King could have a grater power.
Hamish was afraid of not being able to sabe him. Sohe had an idea. I he fistracted, the King, he could break the big jar and take Calum out. He trew some rocks to a pile of boxes, and they fell making a big noise, and distracting the King.
He ran very fast. Took one of the chairs and threw it against the jar. That broke in a million pieces the jar.
And they could came back to their house. Safe and sound.
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